The sentence we started with was 'the fish swam'.
Check out some of the amazing sentences we came up with!
Thursday 27 February 2014
The Fish Swam
Yesterday we were taking boring sentences and making them more interesting by using descriptive words. We decided that more descriptive sentences help the reader to visualise by giving them a clear picture.
The sentence we started with was 'the fish swam'.
Check out some of the amazing sentences we came up with!
The sentence we started with was 'the fish swam'.
Check out some of the amazing sentences we came up with!
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Ka pai Ruma Waru... You have some fabulous descriptive writing skills, some of them are so good I want to learn more about the fish's story!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I liked all the descriptive words you had. - Joanna
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